? ? ?美國(guó)研究生文書(shū)是一個(gè)展示自我的好機(jī)會(huì),因此對(duì)美國(guó)研究生文書(shū)的寫(xiě)作要認(rèn)真。下面是主頁(yè)菌給大家介紹的在美國(guó)研究生文書(shū)寫(xiě)作時(shí)要避免的6種開(kāi)頭,一起了解吧~
一、重復(fù)簡(jiǎn)歷型
I earned my Bachelor of Science degree in … Sciences with a specialization in … in 2002 at … university
點(diǎn)評(píng):不要去重復(fù)簡(jiǎn)歷中的東西,這在很多學(xué)校的PS要求中明確提到,個(gè)人陳述的寫(xiě)作要具體到事件上,事件解決上,而不要單純重復(fù)已有的內(nèi)容。
二、學(xué)校介紹型
I am an undergraduate in…University , the largest university anda cradle of scientific and technological talents in China.
點(diǎn)評(píng):該同學(xué)的PS開(kāi)頭等于是一個(gè)申請(qǐng)學(xué)校的簡(jiǎn)介,這好像是在幫助學(xué)校做宣傳,或表達(dá)你有多了解該學(xué)校,而不是寫(xiě)個(gè)人陳述了。這是沒(méi)有意義的開(kāi)頭,白白浪費(fèi)了字?jǐn)?shù),最容易被秒拒掉。
三、抄襲句式型
As a student majoring in Computer Science, I began my odyssey since I entered undergraduate program. Indeed, having entered this splendid computer world, I am more than greedy for something new.
點(diǎn)評(píng):Odyssey 和more than greedy for something new 這種句式不知道是從哪里學(xué)到的,很多同學(xué)在用。但你要知道,老外最恨抄襲,最喜原創(chuàng),所以利害關(guān)系大家想想吧。
四、救世主型
I am a problem solver. I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to solvevarious problems before me and enjoy doing that. Since I was a little boy, a voice from President Franklin Roosevelt has constantly hovered around my mind, "The world can be changed by man's endeavor, …
點(diǎn)評(píng):一副救世主的形象,小時(shí)候就受富蘭克林的影響,立志改變世界。PS的寫(xiě)作一定要個(gè)人化具體化,別吹牛,甚至帶著一種霸權(quán)主義思維。
五、猶抱琵琶型
Making a right decision at the right time is very important for a young people .At present, I have come to a critical point in my life when I have to make a decision concerning my future course of action. Only a perceptive understanding of oneself will enable one to chart his proper action. Aftercarefully thinking, reviewing my life and analyzing my personality, I make the determination and choose to apply for graduate study in XXX. And I choose to specialize in communications which I will pursue a lifelong career.
點(diǎn)評(píng):重點(diǎn)放在自己要做重大決定上了,人生的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn),然后來(lái)上句所謂名言警句,這是浪費(fèi)字?jǐn)?shù)。在有限的字?jǐn)?shù)里,同學(xué)們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)直接,并且抓住重點(diǎn),突出自己最有優(yōu)勢(shì)的方面,最有特色的方面。
六、憶童年型
“Why the gecko can climb on the wall while we can't-”“Why the leaves turn red in autumn”How many stars are there in the sky-' When I was in childhood,I always kept asking my mom all kinds of questions。I am especially interested in how things work, I can even take apart things for several hours in order to find out its principle.
點(diǎn)評(píng):上來(lái)就回憶童年少年自己如何有著遠(yuǎn)大抱負(fù),who cares?個(gè)人陳述字?jǐn)?shù)有限,卻用這么多話描述童年,沒(méi)有任何意義。學(xué)校想知道你如何看待未來(lái),而不是如何度過(guò)過(guò)去。
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