雅思小作文改寫(xiě)那點(diǎn)事兒

雅思小作文如果讀圖沒(méi)問(wèn)題并且作文囊括所有信息，就可以拿到比較理想的分?jǐn)?shù)嗎？No，No，No！數(shù)據(jù)類(lèi)作文也好，圖片作文也好都容易落入重復(fù)語(yǔ)言的俗套。畢竟數(shù)據(jù)就在哪里，翻來(lái)覆去，流程步驟就是那樣，循規(guī)蹈矩，地圖題好不到哪去，無(wú)非就是變來(lái)變?nèi)?。不過(guò)我們還是可以“以萬(wàn)變應(yīng)不變”把小作文寫(xiě)活起來(lái)。

(1) 改寫(xiě)題目作為開(kāi)頭段(以O(shè)G Test 1為例)

題目：

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British peoplegiving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

改變從現(xiàn)在開(kāi)始：

1. the chart——the bar chart

2. gives——illustrates

3. information——statistical information

4. on關(guān)于——regarding

5. percentage——diverse proportion

6. British——UK

7. people giving money to charity——people who gave money tocharity——donating money to charity

8. age range——different age groups

9. for the years 1990 and 2010——in two respective years: 1990 and 2010

見(jiàn)證奇跡的時(shí)刻：

The bar chart illustrates statistical information regarding the diverseproportion of people in UK donating money to charity by different age groups intwo respective years: 1990 and 2010.

讓世界看到你的改變：親自動(dòng)手DIY你自己的開(kāi)頭段

練習(xí)1：

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. (OG Test 4)

練習(xí)2:

The pie chart below shows the online shopping sales for retail sectors inNew Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

練習(xí)3:

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areasof crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012.

(2) 讓主體段擺脫單調(diào)從改變主語(yǔ)開(kāi)始：(劍4滿(mǎn)分考官范文給我們的啟示)：

The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who wereliving in poverty in Australia in 1999.

On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people,were in this position. However, those consisting of only one parent or a singleadult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19%respectively.

Couples generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels forcouples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeablethat for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportionwere living in poverty at this time.

Older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again thetrend favoured elderly couples (only 4%) rather than single elderly people(6%).

Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those withchildren were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting ofcouples.

在文章里面畫(huà)出所有句子的主語(yǔ)我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，主語(yǔ)可以是數(shù)字，代詞，題中名詞，比重(或趨勢(shì))詞。那么我們也可以分別用到各類(lèi)主語(yǔ)來(lái)變化我們的句式哦!