SAT語法句子改錯例題詳解(3).

21. Having an exceptional beautiful mountain range and heavy winter snowfall,the International Olympic Committee choose Salt Lake city as the site of the 2002 Winter Olympics. Because it has an exceptionally beautiful mountain range and heavy winter snowfall,Salt Lake city was chosen by the International Olympic Committee 點評：一種?？碱}型，因果關系的反映。由于Because的后面的it指Salt Lake city,故后半句主語開頭必為Salt Lake city。 22．The marathon runner’s early burst of speed had been exciting to some,she was slower after several miles. had been excitihg to some;however,she was 點評：句子語氣其實也是這種題的關鍵之一。該句表轉折，且是向不好方向轉折，前面沒有Although等。所以在句中用“however+分號”，呵呵，放之于四海皆準的真理。 23．（?？碱}：對比）The annual income of the average African citizen is 211 dollars,the average American’s income is almost 27591 dollars. dollars,yet the average American’s income is 點評：對比題，所以要體現對比的語氣。原句run-on了.所以正確答案中間用了yet這個詞（和however差不多）。 記住此類題，比較?？? 24．Although the CWS win more often than the CC,Chicago residnets,who are historically mid(此處不清晰) baseball fans,prer the CC。 Right！ 點評：使用正常的語序 25．Because the lens have UV protection,nearly all UV rays are prevented from reaching the wearer’s eyes. protection,they prevent nearly all UV rays from reaching the wearer’s eyes. 點評：prevent sth/sb from doing sth. 老句型了。。。同時注意主語為lenses,所以直接用they。 一般用主動態(tài)多余被動態(tài)（“順”比“逆”好） 26. The hills in SBC,like neighboring SLOC,is the home to some of C’s best vineyards. the hills of neighboring SLOC,are 點評：hills要和hills對比才對稱，be動詞用復數。“of neighboring”這個用法可以記一下。 27（?？碱}：并列）Nurses and anesthesiologists are both essential in the operating room,and the anesthesiologists would keep the patient sedated while the nurses would assist and support the surgeon. the anesthesiologists to keep the patient sedated and the nurses to assist and support 點評：anesthesiologists和nurses為并列關系，所以用“…to… and…to…”避免run-on。記住這種形式，考得比較多，大家做題時多注意類似題目 28．The sausage served at the end of the meal was more flavorful than any of the other pastas I had tasted;probably because it was roasted in its own juices. was more flavorful than any of the pastas I had tasted,probably because 點評：pastas不是sausage，故談到pastas用“any of pastas”不用“any other”。由于后半句談原因，所以和前面是有聯(lián)系的，中間用逗號。 29．When a bacterial culture is handled in an environment that is not appropriately sterilized,they can be introducing new organisms,ruining the culture. When a bacterial culture is handled in an environment that is not appropriately sterilized,new organisms can be introduced,ruining 點評：對這個題我比較無語。。。。。。 30．The hawks’ nest,wedged into an apartment building’s facade,was a rather unique sight in Chicago;they became such an attraction that several book were written about them and tourists came from all over the country to see them. the hawks,after several books were written about them,became such an attraction that 由于最后代詞是“them”，可見所指為復數名詞。而第一句主語為nest, 所以可見第二局主語不是網而是鷹。故正確答案不用代詞為主語，而是將“they”指明，換成“hawks” 31．（?？碱}：并列）The major complaints professors have about teaching is that they have challenging research to complete and must also work hard to hold student interest. are that they have challenging research to complete and must also work hard to hold student interest 點評：主謂一致性要保持，同時使用并列結構。 32．Having achieved fame, widespread acclaim,as well as continued relevance,DS is considered to be a classic American movie. Having achieved fame,widespread acclaim,and continued relevance 點評：用動名詞“Having”沒錯。但能用and就不用as well as(這似乎又是一條規(guī)律)，and前有無逗號無所謂。 33．For as many as 9 months or more,Thad Carthart lived in Paris. For more than 9 months 點評：不說了，簡潔為上！九個月或九個月以上就是“九個月以上” 34．Many home owners in the northern states use a window sealant,for it will prevent heat loss in the winter. that will prevent 點評：談原因，從句有時候更簡潔。 35．The runners coming this far,they decided to push through the very strenuous final mile of the marathon. Having come this far,the runners 點評：記住這個句式，Having done sth,XX…不是說它有知識上的意義（大家肯定早就知道了），只是說它正確的頻率相當高。同時原句沒有轉折語氣就不要用轉折詞。