雅思寫作思維方式介紹（2）.

　　二、句子

　　英語句子開門見山，其主謂結(jié)構(gòu)是全句的“綱”，其余成份是“目”，一般先下結(jié)論，后敘事，從近到遠，新近發(fā)生的事先出現(xiàn)，重心落在句首。漢語句子一般以邏輯關(guān)系和時間的先后順序排列，一般先敘事，后下結(jié)論，由遠及近，重心落在句尾。這種差異體現(xiàn)了直入與螺旋的不同的思維方式。中國學生在英語寫作時往往會受漢語思維的影響，寫出下面的句子：

　　1. a) When I stayed in Guangzhou last month, you helped me. I am gratul for that.

　　2. a) Tom’s mother died when he was only two years old, so he did not remember her.

　　3. a) After we lt China in 1959, the natural calamities happened one after another for three years in the country. While we read about it at home, we had been dismayed.

　　4. a) It looked rain that evening, yet Dad came all the same. That made us very joyful.

　　如果按英語直入的思維方式，以上幾句要改寫成：

　　1. b) I am very gratul for your help to me during my stay in Guangzhou last month.

　　2. b) Tom did not remember his mother who died when he was only two years old.

　　3. b) We had been dismayed at home while reading of the natural calamities that happened one after another for three years after we lt China in 1959.

　　4. b) It looked rain that evening, yet to our great joy, Dad came all the same.

　　這種思維方式的轉(zhuǎn)換要是更復雜一點，對中國學生來說，是需要操練的。例如：

　　1. 我認為如果他們初次相識時，她很窮，他未必會愛她。這位女性由于對他有好感而幫助他，使他心存感激，這種感激之情很容易發(fā)展成為真摯的愛情。

　　I do not suppose he would have loved her if she had been poor when he first knew her, but the gratitude which he felt for the help which he owed to her kindly interest in him easily developed into a sincere affection. (條件關(guān)系和多層因果關(guān)系的轉(zhuǎn)換)

　　2. 她去深圳參加一個會議，會議結(jié)束后，她就到香港去購物，昨天才回來。

　　She came back yesterday from Hong Kong where she had gone shopping after the meeting in Shenzhen.(時間順序的轉(zhuǎn)換)