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高分新GRE寫作范文剖析.

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大家在備考GRE考試的時(shí)候,對(duì)于GRE寫作部分,需要多下功夫,首先學(xué)習(xí)新GRE寫作范文是必不可少的,考生在備考的時(shí)候可以借鑒優(yōu)秀的新GRE寫作范文,學(xué)習(xí)里面的經(jīng)典句型和表達(dá)方式。   考生們都想獲得GRE寫作高分,可是卻苦于找不到合適的方法。下面是澳際教育名師對(duì)GRE高分新GRE寫作范文的指導(dǎo)分析,希望各位考生看后可以有所啟發(fā)。   "Scholars and researchers should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests, however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem."   這個(gè)題目分析起來(lái)是說(shuō)學(xué)術(shù)目的的。作為一個(gè)scholar/researcher應(yīng)該考慮的是自己的感興趣的領(lǐng)域所在而不是考慮是不是他們的研究成果是對(duì)整個(gè)大社會(huì)大環(huán)境有貢獻(xiàn)的。這個(gè)題目第一眼看起來(lái)好象似乎是有理的,但是想到很多時(shí)候很多科學(xué)家的成果實(shí)際是無(wú)意義的。美國(guó)不是有一個(gè)搞笑諾貝爾獎(jiǎng)嗎?就是獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)類似的研究的。雖然也是科學(xué)成果但是根本就沒有實(shí)際操作的價(jià)值或者對(duì)人類或者對(duì)社會(huì)根本就沒有意義的。   但是這個(gè)contribution在某些時(shí)候也可以引申到名利方面。從這個(gè)方面來(lái)講,這個(gè)題目是可以成立的。   對(duì)這個(gè)題目進(jìn)行進(jìn)一步的分析,可以看出來(lái)題目里面有一個(gè)比較,非常明顯的比較,more來(lái)帶出來(lái)的,所以我們可以說(shuō)這個(gè)speaker的觀點(diǎn)是很明顯的表明了自己是支持哪個(gè)方面的。   Should academic scholars and researchers be free to pursue whatever avenues of inquiry and research that interest them, no matter how unusual or idiosyncratic, as the speaker asserts? Or should they strive instead to focus on those areas that are most likely to benit society?   拿問句來(lái)起頭,來(lái)質(zhì)疑。脫離出了一般的解釋題目的開頭。雖然不是特別特別,但是還是讓人感覺比較的attractive。l strongly aGREe with the speaker, for three reasons.非常直白的陳述自己的觀點(diǎn),同意speaker的觀點(diǎn)。   First of all,典型的連接詞,開始陳述觀點(diǎn)了。Who is to decide which areas of academic inquiry are worth while?又是一個(gè)問句,但是這個(gè)問句的作用和開篇的問句不同了,是引出來(lái)自己論證的第一個(gè)方面。Scholars cannot be lt to decide.自問自答。   Given a choice they will pursue their own idiosyncratic areas of interest, and it is highly unlikely that all scholars could reach a fully informed consensus as to what research areas would be most worthwhile. Nor can these decisions be lt to regulators and legislators, who would bring to bear their own quirky notions about what would be worthwhile, and whose susceptibility to influence renders them untrustworthy in any event.   兩個(gè)否定句非常干凈利索的說(shuō)出作者的看法,沒人有能力來(lái)決定什么是應(yīng)該worth researching的。   Secondly, by human nature we are motivated to pursue those activities in which we excel. To compel scholars to focus only on certain areas would be to force many to waste their true talents. For example, imagine relegating today&aposs preeminent astrophysicist Stephen Hawking--霍金我想就不用介紹了吧-- to research the fectiveness of affirmative-action legislation in reducing workplace discrimination. Admittedly, this example borders on hyper(夸張法).Yet the agGREgate fect of realistic cases would be to waste the intellectual talents of our world&aposs scholars and researchers. Moreover, lacking genuine interest or motivation, a scholar would be unlikely to contribute meaningfully to his or her "assigned" field of study.   這個(gè)部分舉例說(shuō)明了,如果把學(xué)者或者科學(xué)家局限于某個(gè)特定的領(lǐng)域內(nèi)的話會(huì)也會(huì)局限其施展自己的talents,是資源的浪費(fèi)。而缺少動(dòng)力或者興趣,人也無(wú)法完全發(fā)揮自己的talents用辨證的方法說(shuō)出interest和contribution二者的關(guān)系。   Thirdly, it is "idiosyncratic" and "unusual" avenues of inquiry that lead to the GREatest contributions to society. Avenues of intellectual and scientific inquiry that break no new ground amount to wasted time, talent, and other resources. History is laden with unusual claims by scholars and researchers that turned out stunningly significant--that the sun lies at the center of our universe, that time and space are relative concepts, that matter consists of discrete particles, that humans evolved from other life forms, to name a few. One current area of unusual research is terraforming--creating biological life and habitable atmospheres where none existed bore. This unusual research area does not immediately address society&aposs pressing social problems. Yet in the longer term it might be necessary to colonize other planets in order to ensure the survival of the human race; and after all, what could be a more significant contribution to society than preventing its extinction?   要想獲得新GRE滿分作文,考生在平時(shí)多加練習(xí)寫作之外,還可以借鑒優(yōu)秀的范文以及背誦模板與核心句型。此外,多加練習(xí)邏輯性也是非常重要的,中國(guó)考生寫作文往往會(huì)出現(xiàn)一些邏輯性錯(cuò)誤,而GRE寫作最看重的也是邏輯思維能力。   以上就是澳際教育名師對(duì)高分新GRE寫作范文的剖析,參加GRE考試的同學(xué),可以通過本文掌握新GRE寫作高分的表達(dá)技巧,希望能夠?qū)Υ蠹业男翯RE寫作考試有所幫助。 澳際培訓(xùn)在國(guó)內(nèi)首家推出專職"學(xué)習(xí)規(guī)劃師"和"留學(xué)規(guī)劃師"制度,對(duì)學(xué)生全程規(guī)劃、全程跟蹤,全程反饋。我們匯聚了國(guó)內(nèi)外頂級(jí)名師,平均教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)在5年以上,并實(shí)行八對(duì)一尊享服務(wù)--課程規(guī)劃師,留學(xué)規(guī)劃師,閱讀教師,寫作教師,聽力教師,口語(yǔ)教師,語(yǔ)法教師,詞匯教師等八位一體。完善的留學(xué)服務(wù)保證,整合了十年留學(xué)服務(wù)經(jīng)驗(yàn),讓我們能將一流培訓(xùn)和申請(qǐng)服務(wù)全程有機(jī)結(jié)合。澳際50%學(xué)子都獲得TOEFL 100和SAT 2000以上的分?jǐn)?shù)。 澳際六步曲第二步考試指導(dǎo)具體服務(wù)項(xiàng)目如下: 1. 免費(fèi)測(cè)評(píng)???,分析申請(qǐng)人的問題,制作考試測(cè)評(píng)報(bào)告和備考指導(dǎo) 2. 結(jié)合申請(qǐng)人的申請(qǐng)目標(biāo)和考試基礎(chǔ),制定考試整體規(guī)劃及時(shí)間安排 3. 提供對(duì)申請(qǐng)人有幫助的考試經(jīng)驗(yàn)和機(jī)經(jīng)等 4. 根據(jù)需要提供免費(fèi)口語(yǔ)模擬和指導(dǎo)服務(wù) 5. 免費(fèi)修改作文4篇 6. 考前心理指導(dǎo),調(diào)整考前心理狀態(tài) (注:口語(yǔ)模擬和作文修改服務(wù)提供時(shí)間為每年2月28日-8月1日)

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