9月GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng):在家工作.

　　9月GMAT機(jī)經(jīng)換庫(kù)了，現(xiàn)在就由小編來(lái)為大家整理九月份的GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng)整理，下面是關(guān)于GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng)的相關(guān)問(wèn)題，分享給大家，希望對(duì)大家有所幫助，文中觀點(diǎn)僅供參考。

　　【本月原始】

　　作文：在家里工作不好的種種原因，所以在辦公室工作可以比在家里工作earn 更多。

　　【8月考古】

　　考古： V1：Generally speaking, it is financially unwise for people quit stable office job and start working from home. It is there are a lot of distractions when people working from home. People working from home tend to procrastinate because there is no discipline. Also, working from home make people isolated. Therore, it is financially more advantageous for people working in the office. It is unwise to quit a stable office job in order to be self-employed and work at home

　　V2：說(shuō)在辦公室工作比在家工作好。有三個(gè)論點(diǎn)：(1)在家工作的人會(huì)面對(duì)更多的abstraction，比如 鄰居 電話 家務(wù)等等。(2)在家工作的人更沒(méi)有時(shí)間計(jì)劃，更傾向與avoid work。(3)與社會(huì)和人群隔離，會(huì)對(duì)人的career advance有限制。整個(gè)argument都沒(méi)有舉例和調(diào)查。

　　1 false causal relationship:

　　Working at home caused the distractions

　　2 gratuitous assumption：在家工作一定錢(qián)少???

　　Income of people working at home would be adversely affected due to distractions at home

　　上班工作， 成本還高呢， 還要坐車(chē)，還要吃飯，還要應(yīng)酬，還要。。。

　　3 gratuitous assumption

　　在辦公室上班 一定會(huì)有 career advancement ??? 造成career advancement 提升的因數(shù)有很多。 比如自身的專(zhuān)業(yè)性啦， professional

　　4. Shirely 補(bǔ)充的第4個(gè)flaw， 看問(wèn)題太片面

　　在辦公室上班也有他的缺點(diǎn)。比如工作環(huán)境不好啊， 同事有時(shí)候也會(huì)造成干擾

　　以上就是對(duì)于9月GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng)的相關(guān)介紹，希望對(duì)大家備考GMAT考試有所幫助，文中觀點(diǎn)僅供參考。