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　　The following appeared as part of a business plan created by the management of the Take Heart Fitness Center:

　　“After opening the new swimming pool early last summer, Take Heart saw a 12 percent increase in the use of the center by its members. Therore, in order to increase membership in Take Heart, we should continue to add new recreational facilities in subsequent years: for example, a multipurpose game room, a tennis court, and a miniature golf course. Being the only center in the area offering this range of activities would give us a competitive advantage in the health and recreation market.”

　　Discuss how well reasoned … etc.

　　Take Heart健身中心的管理者起草的商業(yè)計(jì)劃：

　　去年夏天開了新的游泳池以后，TH發(fā)現(xiàn)會(huì)員對(duì)中心的使用率增加了12%。因此，為了增加我們的會(huì)員數(shù)量來增加收入，我們應(yīng)該在以后幾年中繼續(xù)增加新的娛樂設(shè)施：比如，一個(gè)多功能游戲室，一個(gè)網(wǎng)球場(chǎng)，一個(gè)迷你高爾夫球場(chǎng)。作為本地唯一一家提供各種活動(dòng)的健身中心，我們將在健身和娛樂市場(chǎng)建立競(jìng)爭(zhēng)優(yōu)勢(shì)。

　　思路：

　　1、(忽略它因)認(rèn)為會(huì)員使用游泳池的數(shù)量增加就能增加會(huì)員人數(shù)是沒有根據(jù)的。錯(cuò)誤的建立了這兩者的關(guān)系。也許去年夏天特別的熱，所以大家天天都來游泳，或者新游泳池設(shè)施齊全服務(wù)好，所以會(huì)員們都放棄了去別的地方游泳的選擇。但是不能就直接說明這和會(huì)員人數(shù)會(huì)增加有什么因果關(guān)系。

　　2、(全時(shí)對(duì)等)認(rèn)為去年發(fā)生的事情同樣也會(huì)發(fā)生在將來，沒有根據(jù)。不能證明說他們會(huì)有同樣的結(jié)果。

　　3、(收入和支出)認(rèn)為增加游樂項(xiàng)目就能增加會(huì)員和利潤(rùn)沒有根據(jù)。顧客除了要求更多新穎的游樂設(shè)施，對(duì)服務(wù)的要求和會(huì)員fee也很重要，其他游樂場(chǎng)所降低會(huì)員費(fèi)，提供coupon，bonus，price advantage之類的同樣也有競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力;此外還忽略了增加這么多的游樂設(shè)施要投入的成本很大，也許最后收入還不及投入的成本多，反而使利潤(rùn)下降。

　　范文：

　　Because Take Heart Fitness Center experienced a 12 percent increase in member usage as a result of opening a new swimming pool last summer, the author recommends the addition of new recreational facilities in subsequent years as a means of increasing membership in Take Heart. The author’s recommendation is problematic for several reasons.

　　First, and foremost, the author assumes that an increase in member usage portends an increase in membership. This assumption may hold true in some cases. However, it is unlikely to hold true in the case at hand, because it is reasonable to expect that members would visit the fitness center to inspect and try out the new swimming pool. This would account for the increase in usage. However, since the author provides no evidence that this new rate of usage was sustained, the abrupt increase in usage provides little evidence that the addition of facilities such as the pool will attract new members.

　　Second, the author assumes that the addition of the swimming pool was responsible for the increase in member usage. However, the only evidence for this claim is insufficient to establish the causal claim in question. While temporal precedence is one of the conditions required to establish a causal relationship between two events, by itself it is not a sufficient condition. Consequently, it is possible that the addition of the pool was unrelated to the increase in usage in the manner required by the author’s argument.

　　Finally, the author has provided no evidence to support the contention that Take Heart will be the only center in the area to offer a wide range of activities to its members and thus have a competitive advantage in the fitness market.

　　In conclusion, the author’s beli that adding additional recreational facilities will increase Take Heart’s membership is ill-founded. To strengthen the argument the author would have to provide evidence that member usage is reliable indicator of new membership. Additionally, it would be necessary to show that the cause of the increase in usage was the opening of the new pool.

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