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【個人陳述 】美國本科留學個人陳述如何書寫

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  個人陳述想必大家都知道,申請美國留學重要的文書材料,那么要如何下手呢?接下來澳際小編帶來了書寫指南。

  書寫內(nèi)容。

  申請原因:

  文書的最開始當然是要交代自己的背景啦!

  要讓admission看一眼就知道你遞交申請的原因是啥,簡單直接的表達會讓你的application在多如牛毛的personal statement里成為一股清流,還省去大學招生辦不少過濾廢話的時間!

  短短的一段或兩段里,小伙伴們應重點解決以下兩個問題:

  為什么申請這個科系:何時開始對這個科目感興趣?你是否有逐漸加深對這個科目的了解?

  你如何保持對這個科目的興趣?你對這個科目的興趣是否影響了你的未來甚至職業(yè)規(guī)劃?你為什么想要在大學階段選修這門科目?為什么選擇來美國求學:過去有無接觸英式教育?如有,何時開始、為什么、是否對你的大學申請選擇有直接影響?如無,為什么選擇美國大學本科?

  個人努力:

  然后,就是小伙伴們向大學證明自己真的輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè)、茶飯不思、懸梁刺股、炒雞炒雞想讀這個系的好時候啦!

  我:報告大學,我才不是思想的巨人,行動的矮子呢!我可腳踏實地啦!

  大學:那就證明一波唄。每年辣么多人申請,我干嘛非要招你?

  我:那當然是因為——學術(shù)篇:上學期間你是如何儲備相關(guān)知識的=你選擇的A-Level科目對你理解這個科目有什么作用?

  課余你是如何儲備相關(guān)知識的=讀過的書、看過的電影、聽過的講座、follow過的節(jié)目?

  平常有沒有多看書多讀報?

  近期你申請科目的領(lǐng)域里有沒有發(fā)生什么大事件?你是否讀過相關(guān)的報道分析?這些事件如何啟發(fā)了你?

  經(jīng)歷篇:你是否參加過任何活動或競賽?這些活動與你申請的學科有無直接關(guān)系?如有,你收獲了什么?如無,這個活動對你有什么特殊意義/對你起到了怎樣的幫助值得你寫進文書?

  你是否有過任何工作或社會活動經(jīng)驗?是有償或志愿?如有償,你工作的目的與對這個科目的興趣有關(guān)嗎?如無償,你認為自己從中獲得最大的收獲是什么?是否有任何個人興趣愛好或特殊才能?這些特長對自己/未來對大學有什么幫助?

  國際生:你認為自己有足夠的英語水平應對美國的大學課程嗎?你過去有完成過任何純英教學的課程嗎?有無任何證據(jù)能顯示你具備良好的適應與交流能力?

  附加信息:

  還有一些關(guān)于自己的額外信息,同學們千萬記得提供哦!

  deferredentry:有g(shù)ap year的計劃嗎?如有,打算利用這一年完成什么事情?已經(jīng)過了gapyear?過去一年都做了什么事情/為自己的大學生活做了什么準備?

  AS成績不太理想是否有任何非人為不可控因素的干擾?是否有任何證據(jù)能說服大學你的A2預估成績妥妥的?

  國際學生這一條真不是歧視。但我們要用自己棒棒噠的英語表述證明自己一點都不比本地學生弱!分分鐘寫作水平還高過美國同學好嗎!

  書寫注意事項。

  1、內(nèi)容空洞

  對于PS一定要結(jié)合實例來寫,用例子來展示自己的能力,對所申專業(yè)的熱愛等。而很多申請人寫出來的美國大學文書PS,很多是陳述自己有哪方面的能力,對專業(yè)很有興趣,有學習的能力,動手能力強,把這些個人特點放到文章中,卻沒有下文,來支持上面的論點,毫無說服力。

  一篇好的美國留學申請文書PS是用例子來充實的,申請人的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)和能力也是通過例子向讀者展示的,而不是簡單的列舉出來。

  2、主次不分,沒有邏輯

  很多申請人寫出來的美國大學文書PS,讓人看了之后分不清主次,不知道作者主要想表達什么意思,也看不出來作者有什么能吸引人的地方。

  3、啰嗦,語言不夠簡練

  美國碩士留學申請中,很多同學寫的美國留學申請文書PS語言都不夠簡練,認為寫的多效果好,而事實遠非如此。

  適當?shù)倪\用感嘆句或語氣詞容易讓讀者形成共鳴,但在一篇美國大學文書PS中,反復出現(xiàn)這樣的句子,尤其是相似的句子就顯得矯情了,更不能打動讀者。

  參考范文。

  STATEMENT OF PURPOSE

  ’For Knowledge Itself Is Power’. This is one of my favorite precepts and at this point in my life when I am about to complete my graduation and my future spreads in front of me like a dream, this adage has never influenced my life more than this before.

  Knowledge and proper training are essential to succeed in today's highly competitive world. The best place where I can achieve this is in the United States of America - the undisputed leader in developing new products and processes. Not only is America the birthplace of my chosen field of study, it has also nurtured it for it's full growth and continuous development. To achieve my goals, I want to pursue a Master's program in Computer Science. It is the ideal way for me to gain the knowledge and skills to stand tall as a computer professional.

  During my undergraduate studies, I acquired a comprehensive knowledge of computer hardware in all its complexity. I also learnt of diverse software and their applications. The highly dedicated teaching staff of my college taught me the various concepts involved in the field of computer engineering. Some of the subjects I studied were computer graphics, computer methodology and algorithms, logic circuits, principles of communication engineering, C programming, object oriented programming as well as programming using different tools.

  I take a keen interest in Networking and Database Management Systems. As a part of my final year curriculum, I am working on a project with one of the India's finest web-site designing companies - MicroGiga Info. Sys. Ltd. The aim of the project is to create a web-site. The web-site, called "Jobs4All", aims to provide the user with a job depending upon his qualifications. Various database concepts', programming scripts and the maintenance of a server are some of the features included in our web-site. Some of the products and tools used are ASP scripts, Java scripts, Microsoft Access '97, Personal Web Server, etc. I am also interested in System Programming. For this very reason, I have selected Compiler Construction as the elective subject for my final year.

  There is truly no end to learning, as this has become a world where a constant addition to abilities is the key to growth in a dynamic world. I am fortunate to belong to a family that places a high value of education. I have been given all the encouragement and facility to develop my talents and interests. I have completed several courses in public speaking and leadership training. Sports, music and reading also fill my life. I was also one of the organizer's for the Open Software competition in TECHNOMANIA '98, which is an inter-college festival annually, organized annually by my college. I am also an active participant in various events held in other institutes.

  I seek to fulfill my goals in an environment that encourages creativity and motivation. I feel confident that the staff and facilities in your institute will provide me with such an environment. I am well aware of the demands of studying in the more competitive American environment. I am certain that I am mentally and physically competent to succeed at your school. I am basically a hard working and a sincere person. My enthusiasm and urge to excel will help me to make the best use of every learning opportunity.

  In conclusion I would like to say that the knowledge gained from 4 years of engineering has provided me with a solid foundation. This will certainly help me in my desire to specialize in my chosen field. My country India has a thriving software industry. I aim to study abroad and return with the skill and competence to find my mark and be a vital part of this booming, futuristic industry. I assure you of my sincerity, dedication and hard work.

  

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