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2020澳洲本科留學的個人陳述怎么寫

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本文標題:2020澳洲本科留學的個人陳述怎么寫,如今留學的人越來越多,不論高中生、大學生還是讀研的學生,都想早日去留學接受好的教育,很多同學對澳洲本科留學的個人陳述怎么寫,澳洲留學中介,澳洲留學條件的相關問題有所疑問,下面澳際小編整理了《2020澳洲本科留學的個人陳述怎么寫》,歡迎閱讀,如有疑問歡迎聯(lián)系我們的在線老師,進行一對一答疑。

  想要申請澳洲本科留學,那么大家是必須要準備個人陳述的,在書寫上有一定的技巧。想必大家還不知道,今天澳際為大家介紹澳洲本科留學個人陳述怎么寫?

  概述。

  PS的不同叫法:PS雖然是Personal Statement的簡稱,翻譯為個人陳述,但是個人陳述在不同的學校叫法可能會有所不同,最常見的有:Personal Statement,Statement of Purpose,Academic Statement of Purpose,Statement of Objectives,Statement of Intent,Letter of Interests,Academic Objectives......其實這些都是我們常說的PS。

  書寫內(nèi)容。

  一、希望申請該校的什么專業(yè),如果申請碩士或者博士研究生,還應當闡明自己希望學習和研究的方向;

  二、對所申請專業(yè)的理解,最好能說明自己希望在此專業(yè)學得什么東西;

  三、陳述自己的優(yōu)勢,以證明自己適合該課程并有能力完成該課程。那么,哪些可以視為自己的優(yōu)勢呢?比如學習成績,專業(yè)研究經(jīng)歷等。如果能提供發(fā)表的專業(yè)論文或者跟某個導師從事某個研究項目的經(jīng)歷,則能為自己的申請加分不少;

  四、展示自己的綜合素質和能力。一般澳洲大學并不完全依據(jù)申請者的學術與語言成績就決定是否錄取,而是希望申請者是一位綜合素質能力突出的學生。參加志愿者活動、學生活動或是組織某些大型活動的經(jīng)歷都是可以加分的因素。另外,如果申請者有藝體或者大型比賽獲獎的經(jīng)歷都可以拿來作為相當好的寫作素材;

  五、選擇該學校的原因。這一點是主要看你對申請的學校是否了解。建議申請者要充分了解這所學校,闡明這個學校最吸引你的地方。

  六、談談自己的研究或者學習打算,最好再談一下自己的職業(yè)規(guī)劃。職業(yè)規(guī)劃最好能和希望學習的專業(yè)緊密結合。

  書寫技巧。

  1、突出個性化

  在個人陳述的開頭,可以用你一個獨特的故事開始你的個人陳述,以充分的個人情感表達對這個課程項目的獨特興趣。

  2、表現(xiàn)獨特性

  描述你的重要經(jīng)歷,既可以是你興趣發(fā)展的歷史經(jīng)歷,也可以是增強你申請該課程決心的特殊經(jīng)歷,還可以是對你的人生產(chǎn)生深刻影響的經(jīng)歷。

  3、表明可行性

  你對學校、課程、研究領域、教授的了解將有助于為入學部工作人員留下深刻影響。你在解釋為什么你與申請課程相匹配時,這方面的內(nèi)容將加強可行性的說明。

  4、委婉地表達

  你必須在個人陳述中誠懇地表達你的觀點和想法,但是必須策略地描述你的優(yōu)勢和不足,即以積極、肯定的觀點表達你能夠滿足入學要求,委婉地表達你會改進不足。特別是你的不足與入學要求相沖突時,這一點顯得尤為重要。

  5、澳洲留學申請清晰陳述目標

  你必須在個人陳述中表明你所申請的課程將有助于你達到你的預定目標。注意在寫作中靈活地使用短期目標和長期目標之間的辯證關系。

  參考范文。

  Pick up any newspaper today and you can find many headlines related to stories about economic problems and trends. I am always deeply absorbed in the economic news, especially in the analysis and description of the capital markets.

  I was born in XX City, a large city with lots of heavy industry companies. My father is an engineer in a shipbuilding institute and my mother is a technician in an electronic apparatus factory. Since I was very young, they began to teach me plenty of knowledge of natural science and hoped me to become an engineer like them one day. But they changed their mind when they find me interested in the field of economics, an absolutely different area they were not familiar with. They agreed to send me to XXX Finance and Economic University which has been ranked in the top ten in my country by commerce economics.

  In the year of 2000, I entered the faculty of Investing Economy of that university and started my four-year strict education. In the first two years, I laid more emphasis on the basic theories, such as models in economics and investing. Later in my 3rd and 4th semesters, I found that lacking of practice became a bottle neck of further studying. Fortunately, my graduated thesis tutor, Professor XXX and Teacher XXX provided me some good opportunities to practice in the Company of Nahu Real Estate and Sanxia Securities Company, in which I lived a substantial and pleasing time. Besides my major, computer science is my anther interest. In the last year of my university, I was certified with MCSE and got a part time teaching job in Richinfo Teaching Center, which largely increased my communication abilities. When I finished my graduated thesis, I got the Bachelor s Degree of Economics successfully in July 2000.

  On the day of 28 September 2004, I began my career in the accounting and funding department of Beijing XXX Company and was assigned the duty of investing. My company usually got irregular cash flows so lots of money was left unused. At first I followed my workmate, Mr. XX, a senior staff in my department and put only a little fund in the securities market. The initial success was a great encouragement to me and I began to invest more. 2002 was a golden year for me though the whole market was not good. In that year I admit 90,000 shares of the stock--Sea Oil Project and 50,000 shares of stock-Da Sha in thier Initial Public Offering and sell them in the same year. That brought us 1,100,000¥ profits before taxation and my work results was highly confirmed by the general manager and other colleagues. The luck continued to the first half year of 2003 until the stagnancy of the whole stock market in July. Now I am directly led by the general manager and do some management and marketing work as well.

  The four years of working matured me rapidly not only in technique skills but also in abilities of communication and cooperation with colleagues and other person. With the opening policy of China s Capital Market, I realize internationalization is a trend I must make good preparations for. So I determined to go abroad to go on further learning about financial knowledge and improved my English skills and the course of master of finance will be my best choice..

  Socialising is very important to me, and I am always keen to meet new people. I enjoy trying new culture and new foods. My good culinary skills will prove very useful to the daily life of my future foreign studying. I enjoy traveling and learning about modern history. Music is one of my biggest hobbies, and I use music to help me unwind and reflect on things. I use the internet to keep up with current affairs and sports news.

  I have always been a keen sportsman, representing my school of basketball competition many times and now I often play it in the evening. I also enjoy playing tennis and table tennis, as well as football.

  I believe that I have made sufficient preparations for a new university life. My skills together with my ambition to succeed prove me to be good candidate for your master degree.

  

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