雅思寫(xiě)作 常見(jiàn)10類連接詞錯(cuò)誤

　　雅思表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤1：on the other hand一般引導(dǎo)對(duì)比的東西，不等于besides, furthermore, secondly

　　例子：Many young people enjoy online shopping. on the one hand, it saves time. On the other hand, it saves money.

　　評(píng)講：save time和save money 是兩個(gè)并列的有點(diǎn)，沒(méi)有對(duì)比的關(guān)系，最好用firstly, secondly。

　　雅思表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤2：on the contrary以為是In contrast的替換詞

　　例子：The birth rate rose. On the contrary, the infant mortatality rate dropped.

　　評(píng)講：on the contrary 一般出現(xiàn)的語(yǔ)境是前面出現(xiàn)否定信息。這個(gè)詞組基本上不用于雅思作文。

　　雅思表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤3：while, whereas認(rèn)為是in contrast的替換詞

　　例子：The birth rate rose. While the infant mortatality rate dropped.

　　評(píng)講：while 是從屬連詞，要連接兩個(gè)獨(dú)立的句子，這里應(yīng)該是“,while”或者改成“in contrast”

　　雅思表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤4：besides, furthermore, what’s more, moreover, in addition被認(rèn)為是“遞進(jìn)”的連接詞

　　例子：Many people today choose to study in foreign countries. Besides, they can gain qualifications in foreign universities.

　　評(píng)講：besides一般引導(dǎo)兩個(gè)并列的觀點(diǎn)，不指代因果關(guān)系，這里應(yīng)該是“because of this”比較合理。很有意思的是，有一次我上課問(wèn)學(xué)生什么是“遞進(jìn)”，舉個(gè)中文的例子給我看，竟然沒(méi)有學(xué)生能夠舉出恰當(dāng)?shù)闹形睦??？梢?jiàn)很多學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)都是人云亦云，對(duì)一些概念其實(shí)根本不理解。

　　雅思表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤5：however被認(rèn)為是on the other hand的同義詞

　　例子：Working from home has benited many people. However, it can cause problems.

　　評(píng)講：however一般是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，也就是后面的句子意思往往代表作者的首要立場(chǎng)。而on the other hand一般是并列關(guān)系，也就是前后句子或者觀點(diǎn)沒(méi)有輕重之分，是并列的，一般是兩個(gè)事情的對(duì)比，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折。

　　雅思表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤6：by doing this, in this way被認(rèn)為是as a result, therore, as a consequence 等

　　例子：Many people work long hours. By doing this, they may suffer poor health.

　　評(píng)講：一般by doing this, in this way都是用在人們有計(jì)劃地做某個(gè)事情，最后為了達(dá)到一定目的，或者效果。那么，顯然不可能后面出現(xiàn)不好的結(jié)果，譬如說(shuō)poor health。因此在這里用as a result最好。

　　雅思表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤7：as a result, therore, thus, as a consequence 都是連接詞，而不是連詞

　　例子：many people today prer to use mobile phones to communicate with their friends, as a result, the face-to-face contact declines.

　　評(píng)講：as a result類似于副詞，沒(méi)有連詞的功能，所以前面要用句號(hào)或者;號(hào)

　　雅思表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤8：thereby 不是therore的替換詞

　　例子：Many libraries have Internet connection now, thereby, people can do research online.

　　評(píng)講：thereby的習(xí)慣用法是thereby+doing something, 不能違反這個(gè)規(guī)則，千萬(wàn)不要以為thereby 用了比therore高大上

　　雅思表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤9：in order to 一般是表示有目的地去做某個(gè)事情，要注意邏輯主語(yǔ)，而且一般不會(huì)用否定

　　例子：Governments should not invest in the arts, in order to save money.

　　評(píng)講：這個(gè)句子用否定讀起來(lái)很不通順，用governments should cut down on the spending on the arts, in order to save money.

　　雅思表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤10：with如果加名詞，往往是表示“有了…”，后面一般不加負(fù)面的東西

　　例子：With pollution, many people will have health problems.

　　評(píng)講：pollution是不好的東西，用with很怪異，用because of好一點(diǎn)