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學(xué)生姓名:D同學(xué)
畢業(yè)院校及專業(yè):國內(nèi)重點(diǎn)大學(xué)生物轉(zhuǎn)財(cái)務(wù)管理專業(yè)
申請(qǐng)專業(yè):金融
語言成績:GPA:90/100;TOEFL:112;GMAT:710
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申請(qǐng)?jiān)盒d浫〗Y(jié)果:
1.?????? Johns Hopkins University (錄?。?br /> 2.?????? Washington University in St. Louis (錄?。?br /> 3.?????? University of Maryland (錄?。?br /> 4.?????? University of Connecticut (錄?。?br /> 5.?????? University of Rochester (等待名單)
6.?????? Brandeis University(等待名單)
7.?????? Fordham University (結(jié)果等待中)
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在美國院校的眾多專業(yè)中,金融專業(yè)向來都是中國申請(qǐng)者追逐的對(duì)象,與此同時(shí),TOP50商學(xué)院對(duì)于申請(qǐng)者的要求也高,TOEFL:100以上,GMAT:700以上基本上是頂尖商學(xué)院對(duì)于申請(qǐng)者最基本的要求,商科名校申請(qǐng)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)是異常激烈的,那么在申請(qǐng)者同等條件下,文書寫作部分就會(huì)顯得異常重要。D同學(xué)硬件條件非常不錯(cuò),大二就已和澳際簽約,從一開始就有了很好的規(guī)劃,相應(yīng)地她所有學(xué)校也都趕了第一輪申請(qǐng),搶占了先機(jī)。這里需要指出越早申請(qǐng)?jiān)胶?,一定是基于充分的?zhǔn)備之上,不建議在沒有準(zhǔn)備好的情況下,匆忙趕第一輪申請(qǐng)。對(duì)于D同學(xué)的文書,我們?cè)谥φ宫F(xiàn)她數(shù)理背景強(qiáng)的同時(shí),也在文書中通過學(xué)生發(fā)起公益性的商業(yè)活動(dòng)非常自然地展示出學(xué)生的愛心,公益精神以及領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力。在美國公益組織非常多,美國本身是建立在公民自治的基礎(chǔ)之上,而政府的權(quán)利相對(duì)就小,因此,美國社會(huì)非??粗貍€(gè)體的志愿精神,而且商業(yè)倫理道德也是商科院校非??粗氐模怨P者認(rèn)為具有愛心的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者更具競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力。
下面筆者針對(duì)D同學(xué)所選的幾個(gè)學(xué)校文書題目進(jìn)行解析:
1Johns Hopkins University這所學(xué)校是中國申請(qǐng)者常申的學(xué)校之一,學(xué)校文書分為必答題和選答題兩部分,必答題部分要求500字;非必答題部分如果選擇作答,需要從4個(gè)題目中選擇其一作答
必答題部分要求申請(qǐng)者寫一次自己開創(chuàng)機(jī)會(huì),構(gòu)建一個(gè)新的產(chǎn)品或者體系或者你激勵(lì)他人行動(dòng)的經(jīng)歷,學(xué)校更傾向于看到是申請(qǐng)者的職業(yè)經(jīng)歷,學(xué)術(shù)追求或者是民眾參與的活動(dòng)。對(duì)于有工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)的申請(qǐng)者來講,無疑我們的首選是從職業(yè)經(jīng)歷中去選取素材;對(duì)于應(yīng)屆畢業(yè)生可以選擇學(xué)術(shù)經(jīng)歷或者專業(yè)性的比賽或者活動(dòng)或者公益性的志愿者活動(dòng)經(jīng)歷;
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而約翰霍普金斯可選擇性的問題包括4個(gè)話題,分別是三個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)和一個(gè)待提高的方面;商業(yè)人文關(guān)懷;你將來想要解決的商業(yè)領(lǐng)域的難題;上傳視頻;筆者建議如果你在硬件條件方面沒有足夠的勝出的信心,這里建議選擇自己擅長的話題作答。
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2Washington University in St. Louis
華盛頓圣路易斯大學(xué)錄取難度非常大,學(xué)校2016年的文書題目和去年有所不同,必答題部分字?jǐn)?shù)由1000字縮至500字,由原來偏學(xué)術(shù)的目的陳述變?yōu)殛P(guān)注于申請(qǐng)者本身的多元化的經(jīng)歷及故事的自我介紹。很顯然,學(xué)校更希望通過這篇必答文書看到申請(qǐng)者身上獨(dú)特的閃光點(diǎn),筆者認(rèn)為學(xué)校更多地是想考量申請(qǐng)者情商高低,更希望看到申請(qǐng)者個(gè)性化的經(jīng)歷。對(duì)于自選性文書申請(qǐng)者可用于解釋GPA低于3.0的情況,有重大疾病影響學(xué)業(yè)的情況等特殊情況的解釋說明。
3University of Maryland
馬里蘭大學(xué)的文書題目是最常見的長短期的職業(yè)目標(biāo)和職業(yè)規(guī)劃,為什么選擇馬里蘭大學(xué)商學(xué)院,為什么現(xiàn)在選擇讀碩士項(xiàng)目?篇幅要求在500字。同時(shí),馬里蘭大學(xué)要求上傳網(wǎng)上面試視頻,申請(qǐng)者注意自身儀容儀表要整潔大方,熟識(shí)簡歷和個(gè)人陳述的內(nèi)容。
4University of Connecticut
康涅狄格主文書仍然是最常見的長短期的職業(yè)目標(biāo),以及康涅狄格的項(xiàng)目如何能夠幫你實(shí)現(xiàn)這些目標(biāo)。即你看重學(xué)校項(xiàng)目的哪些優(yōu)勢(shì),而補(bǔ)充題目是學(xué)校想知道申請(qǐng)者能夠?yàn)閷W(xué)校帶來什么?比如申請(qǐng)者獨(dú)特的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷與文化背景。
5University of Rochester
羅切斯特也是非常常規(guī)的文書題目長短期目標(biāo),需要標(biāo)明想要從事的行業(yè)以及一個(gè)備選的短期目標(biāo),最后,為什么羅切斯特商學(xué)院最適合你?第二個(gè)題目筆者認(rèn)為學(xué)校想了解學(xué)生的個(gè)性特點(diǎn)告即訴我們一個(gè)關(guān)于你的有趣的事實(shí),筆者認(rèn)為細(xì)節(jié)的描寫勝過宏觀概括優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)。
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6Brandeis UniversityFordham University
這兩個(gè)學(xué)校也都是常規(guī)的題目為什么選擇該校該專業(yè),學(xué)校項(xiàng)目對(duì)于申請(qǐng)者的職業(yè)發(fā)展有什么幫助?自選性文書,申請(qǐng)者可做特殊情況說明。如果其他申請(qǐng)材料中已經(jīng)展示的內(nèi)容,在此不必贅述。
總之,商科文書話題包括長短期職業(yè)目標(biāo),領(lǐng)導(dǎo)經(jīng)歷,失敗的經(jīng)歷及教訓(xùn),道德困境,重要成就,長處與不足,自選性文書,另外大部分商科院校還會(huì)經(jīng)常問到你為什么選擇我們的商學(xué)院,你覺得我們的項(xiàng)目能在哪些方面幫到你,所以申請(qǐng)者要注意選校,寫文書也像談戀愛一樣,兩廂情愿才能一拍即合,我們?cè)趯懽约喝绾斡心芰θW(xué)習(xí)商科研究生項(xiàng)目的同時(shí),也要對(duì)每個(gè)學(xué)校的項(xiàng)目特點(diǎn)和學(xué)校所能提供的資源了然于心,這樣就可以針對(duì)學(xué)校陳述自己的優(yōu)勢(shì),讓學(xué)校覺得你就是我們想要的候選人,我們現(xiàn)有的資源有能力把你培養(yǎng)成優(yōu)秀的人才。
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附:約翰霍普金斯英文文書題目
Compulsory Essay: Please respond to the following question:
Business leaders have the ability to create opportunities, build products and systems, and inspire others to action. Please describe a time you created an opportunity, built a new product or system, or inspired others to act. The example you provide and elaborate upon may come from your professional endeavors, academic pursuits or civic engagements. (500 word maximum)
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Optional Essay - Select 1 option from list below:

1). Please describe three of your primary strengths and how those strengths have been put into action for the betterment of the communities or businesses you have served or endeavors you have pursued. Also share one area in need of improvement and the steps you have taken to improve within that area. (250 words maximum)?

OR

2). Business with humanity in mind means many things to different people. Please explain what business with humanity in mind means to you and how you will apply your knowledge, skills and abilities to advance this ideal over the next five years. (250 words maximum)?

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3). Please identify a tough problem that you are committed to addressing as a future business leader. What role will you play in the solution? What skills and abilities do you have (or might you need to acquire) to tackle this task? (250 words maximum)?

OR

4). Upload a Word document with a link to a short video you prepared and post for our review. If the video includes audio, the audio file must be in English and must be clear enough to hear easily. The video should be no more than 5 minutes in length and should help the admissions committee learn something more about you. You can feel free to be creative but please use your professional judgment on what material is most appropriate for application to the Johns Hopkins Carey Business School.
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附華大圣路易斯英文文書題目
Required Essay
Please respond to both of the following required items in one uploaded document:

1.??In one or two sentences, please describe your immediate career plans upon graduation from Olin.
2.??At Olin, we pride ourselves on our close-knit community and aim to know every student by name and story. In an essay of no more than 500 words, please introduce yourself as you would to your future Olin classmates.
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Optional Essay
Please provide any additional information not previously addressed in other areas of the application that you feel would be helpful to the Admissions Committee in its assessment of your candidacy. (300 word maximum)
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附:馬里蘭文書題目
What are your specific post-degree short-term and long-term goals? Why Smith? Why a masters degree? Why now? Please limit your response to 500 words.
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附:康涅狄格文書題目
Primary Essay
Why are you interested in pursuing your graduate business degree at this stage in your life/career? What are your short-term and long-term career goals and how will this graduate business program help you achieve these goals?
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Supplemental Essay
How will you and your experiences and values contribute to our program?
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Optional Essay
Please provide any additional information that you would like to present to the admissions committee if you feel it is not appropriately reflected in your application and essays to better represent you.
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附:羅切斯特文書題目
Essay 1 (Required):?Describe your short-term and long-term goals for post-MBA or post-MS. Given the fluctuation of economic and industry hiring trends, identify a back-up plan should your short-term goal not be immediately attainable. How does your past education and experience support your career objectives? Lastly, what aspects of your intended Simon Business School program make it a good choice for your graduate study? (250-500 word limit)*
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Essay 2 (Required for Full-Time MBA/MS Only):?In 25 words or less, provide us with an interesting fact about yourself not expressed elsewhere in your application. (25 word limit)
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Essay 3 (Optional):?Share additional information you think is important in the evaluation of your application, including any concerns you think the Admissions Committee may have regarding your candidacy. (500 word limit)
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