SAT語法句子改錯例題詳解(4).

36. Some of the classes taught in American classrooms are interpretations of lessons used worldwide,particularly those in European history. classroom,particularly in European history,are interpreations of lessons used worldwide. 點評：注意指代對象 37．Joann,the newest student at Leon Blum high school,has been portrayed as the brightest student and also the most unruly of them. the brightest and yet the most unruly of students. 點評：記住吧。。。the brightest and yet the most unruly of students，后面還有一道關于老虎的題也差不多。 38．Ann’s parents explained that she was promoted to hear journalist for the reason that her articcles were mindful always for both side of the issue. because her articles were always mindful of both sides of the issues 點評：表原因最好還是用簡潔的表達方法，如“because”，“since”等單個詞而不是如“for the reason that”等結(jié)構。簡潔 39．（?？碱}：轉(zhuǎn)折）Many wealthy taxpayers pay less than ten percent of their annual incomes to the government,some middle-income taxpayers pay a much larger percentage annually. Although many wealthy taxpayers pay 點評：轉(zhuǎn)折句，富人少給，較窮人多給，故用“雖然。。。但是。。?！盨AT題中很多都談到這種“不公平”現(xiàn)象。改的時候一般在前就用Although，在后就用yet。（和那個非洲人和美國人收入題類似） 40. OW was almost as brilliant a novelist as he was at writing plays. almost as brilliant a novelist as he was a playwright 點評：并列結(jié)構，故前后都因該用職業(yè)（名詞）。所以說要考慮對比/類比雙方的一致性。 41．Examining the catalogue,the phrase “while supplies last” and “get it while it’s hot” are designed to encourage consumers to order the product immeidately. one sees that the phrase 點評：注意動作的執(zhí)行者。Examing后面必須對應一個能去Exam的主語。 42．In professional soccer,players kick the ball sharply and accurately;however in other sports their technique is not quite so fective. Right! 點評：呵呵，每一行都有每一行的門道。轉(zhuǎn)折關系用轉(zhuǎn)折詞。 43．The changing color of autumn leaves has a unique fascination for those people which have an understanding of life-cycles in them.. who see the life cycles in them. 點評： “see”也有“理解”的意思,直接用動詞更簡潔。同時，修飾“people”用who而不用which。 44．It was primarily when I visited the seashore that I felt nostalgic for my childhood home,growing up on a small island. as I had grown up on a small island 點評：后面的部分是說明自己童年的情況而不是修飾home的。 45．Bore 1988,the CBD included 153 menbers,none of the member were women. members,none of whom were women. 點評：原句run-on了，所以后面不能是一個完整句子。同時“none of 一群對象”后面謂語用復數(shù)。 46．Although talent may be a crucial element on the road to fame,it will be difficult to get very far without a highly developed work ethic. Right! 點評：正確！這個句子前面出現(xiàn)過，不過考察方向不同。這種句式“Although…is important”，后面常用“it is…to…”不用比較級，除非有對照物。 47．The DOS argued that although the U’s professors have raised students’ interest in continuing in academic study,the failure is in their not preparing the students for the real word outside of textbooks and caculators. they have failed to prepare 點評： 有Although表轉(zhuǎn)折的句子轉(zhuǎn)折之間后面的一般和前面的句式一樣，時態(tài)相同（haver raised 與 have failed）