2月GMAT作文機經(jīng)：公司搬去the city of Helios.

　　1月的機經(jīng)剛分享完，緊接著新年的GMAT機經(jīng)就整理出來了，為大家分享關于公司搬去the city of Helios的機經(jīng)

　　，希望大家能感受到這股暖意，并把它化為能量，在GMAT考試的道路上勇往直前。

　　【原始】

　　貌似是在給the city of Helios 做廣告。

　　說那些想要尋找機會并且想要尋找新的地點投資設廠的corparation要注意了。the city of Helios會是你們的一

　　個很好地選擇，因為它在經(jīng)濟不景氣的那些年里依然保持the unemployment rate low。另外現(xiàn)在該市還有許多政

　　策吸引那些focus on the research of the innovation technologies 的公司.

　　【考古】

　　V1 一個regional life的magazine的article里面有段話，說corporation都應該去Helios 這個城市找new

　　business opportunity或者new location。因為之前recession的時候Helios的unemployment rate was lower

　　than regional average。且過去很多年Helios 都是industrial 中心。說現(xiàn)在Helios為了expand economy base要

　　引進research and development new technology的公司。

　　樓主由于昨兒沒寂靜 嚇得凌晨2am才休息，本來就才6小時基本上沒睡著。?？催@個題目比較暈乎。。。只寫了時

　　間上的(過去好不等于未來好)還有說unemployment rate 關是否適合new business 啥事。很可能一開始

　　unemployment rate就很低，所以即使這個城市其實失業(yè)率increase sharply最后還是低于average，但是實際上整

　　個經(jīng)濟已經(jīng)不好了。而這個城市之所以要招商很可能要么發(fā)展到了瓶頸要么已經(jīng)開始下坡了，所以才要招商。最后

　　建議好歹給一點關于這個城市未來發(fā)展預測的數(shù)據(jù)。(by: 昆侖飛)

　　V2 (疑似原題!) The following appeared as part of an article in a magazine devoted to regional

　　life.

　　“Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new business opportunities or a new

　　location. Even in the recent recession, Helios’s unemployment rate was lower than the regional

　　average. It is the industrial center of the region, and historically it has provided more than its

　　share of the region’s manufacturing jobs. In addition, Helios is attempting to expand its economic

　　base by attracting companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies.”(感

　　謝wangxin1129 ?)

　　【參考范文】

　　In this argument corporations are urged to consider the city of Helios when seeking a new location

　　or new business opportunities. To support this recommendation, the author points out that Helios is

　　the industrial center of the region, providing most of the region’s manufacturing jobs and enjoying

　　a lower-than-average unemployment rate. Moreover, it is argued, forts are currently underway to

　　expand the economic base of the city by attracting companies that focus on research and development

　　of innovative technologies. This argument is problematic for two reasons.

　　To begin with, it is questionable whether the available labor pool in Helios could support all types

　　of corporations. Given that Helios has attracted mainly industrial and manufacturing companies in

　　the past, it is unlikely that the local pool of prospective employees would be suitable for

　　corporations of other types. For example, the needs of research and development companies would not

　　be met by a labor force trained in manufacturing skills. For this reason, it’s unlikely that Helios

　　will be successful in its attempt to attract companies that focus on research and development of

　　innovative technologies.

　　Another problem with the available work force is its size. Due to the lower than average

　　unemployment rate in Helios, corporations that require large numbers of workers would not find

　　Helios attractive. The fact that few persons are out of work suggests that new corporations will

　　have to either attract new workers to Helios or pay the existing workers higher wages in order to

　　lure them away from their current jobs. Neither of these alternatives seems enticing to companies

　　seeking to relocate.

　　In conclusion, the author has not succeeded in providing compelling reasons for selecting Helios as

　　the site for a company wishing to relocate. In fact, the reasons offered function better as reasons

　　for not relocating to Helios. Nor has the author provided compelling reasons for companies seeking

　　new business opportunities to choose Helios.

　　以上就是關于GMAT機經(jīng)的全部內容，考生朋友可以有選擇的看看，最后需要提醒各位的是，GMAT機經(jīng)雖然會對我們

　　解題有所幫助，但是在考場中即使題目很像也要避免秒選，最后祝大家都能考出好成績。