GMAT語法改錯(cuò)學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用排除法(三).

　　最后我們再看一道題來說明從幾個(gè)都是錯(cuò)誤的選項(xiàng)中來找出一個(gè)相對正確答案的應(yīng)用。

　　3.The modernization program for the steel mill will cost approximately 51 million dollars, which it is hoped can be completed in the late 1980&aposs.

　　(A) The modernization program for the steel mill will cost approximately 51 million dollars, which it is hoped can be completed in the late 1980&aposs.

　　(B) The modernization program for the steel mill, hopully completed in the late 1980&aposs, will cost approximately 51 million dollars.

　　(C) Modernizing the steel mill, hopully to be completed in the late 1980&aposs, will cost approximately 51 million dollars.

　　(D) The program for modernizing the steel mill, which can, it is hoped, be completed in the late 1980&aposs and cost approximately 51 million dollars.

　　(E) Modernizing the steel mill, a program that can, it is hoped, be completed in the late 1980&aposs, will cost approximately 51 million dollars.

　　這道題目中A選項(xiàng)的it is hoped是個(gè)插入語，應(yīng)該前后用兩個(gè)逗號隔開。而且A中的which語法上看指代了dollar美圓，而從邏輯來分析其實(shí)是應(yīng)該指代program項(xiàng)目的，所以A錯(cuò)了。B選項(xiàng)和C選項(xiàng)用了hopully這個(gè)詞，這不符合商業(yè)英文的用法，一般是錯(cuò)誤的，應(yīng)該改為it is hoped。D選項(xiàng)犯了個(gè)非常嚴(yán)重的語法錯(cuò)誤，它缺少謂語，所以肯定是錯(cuò)誤選項(xiàng)。最后答案選E，而其實(shí)E選項(xiàng)也只是個(gè)相對最佳而非絕對最優(yōu)，因?yàn)樗帕薓odernizing the steel mill這個(gè)分詞結(jié)構(gòu)做主語，應(yīng)該把它改成the modernization of the steel mill名詞形式來做主語會(huì)更好一點(diǎn)，但由于這只是個(gè)不簡潔的錯(cuò)誤，屬于有效性的錯(cuò)誤，與A，B，C，D的錯(cuò)誤性質(zhì)比較起來顯得輕微許多，所以答案選E。