加拿大留學(xué)文章

　　在加拿大留學(xué)申請(qǐng)的過程中，文書起著重要的作用。好的文書可以給錄取委員會(huì)留下較好的印象并加大成功的幾率，不好的文書也會(huì)毫無疑問讓人反感，影響錄取結(jié)果。文書好不好體現(xiàn)在哪里呢？如何寫好加拿大留學(xué)文書呢？在此，澳際教育專家為大家介紹加拿大留學(xué)文書如何寫。

　　內(nèi)容上詳實(shí)豐富，充分體現(xiàn)申請(qǐng)人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，格式上整潔清晰，一目了然，這些都是很重要的，然而，詞匯的運(yùn)用和句子的處理，對(duì)于文書質(zhì)量的好壞也起著決定性作用。在此澳際留學(xué)專家就文書寫作中的句型的問題，略談一點(diǎn)心得。

　　在一篇文章中，如果句子千篇一律是簡(jiǎn)單句，文章必定很單調(diào)乏味，毫無活力。如果全篇充滿了冗長(zhǎng)的復(fù)雜句，讀起來也很費(fèi)力。如下面的兩個(gè)例子：

　　More than twenty years ago， my hometown was just an old， poor and small town. Most of the people were farmers. There were only two factories. The people lived a hard life. great changes have taken place in the past twenty years. The local economy improved a lot. Now there are many tall buildings. Roads are wide and clean. People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work. Their living conditions have improved a lot…

　　親哪，這更像是在寫高中作文！另一個(gè)例子：

　　When I accompanied them on the trip to do research on desertification control in Inner Mongolia and Qinghai Province， I found that the scarcer the resource of a district was， the wilder the local people’s producing activity was， such as excessive reclamation and graze， which was a infernal circle that increasing worsened the environment and lessened the economic level. On the other hand， once we were in Zhejiang Province where bamboo shoots were abundant， I witnessed a more unfortunate economic pattern that farmers by hook or by crook dug up bamboo shoots for sale in recent years but still remained poor and backward state for they disregarded the significance of sustainable development and ran out of resources…

　　如果一篇文章中偶爾一段出現(xiàn)這樣的句子還好，假如通篇都是這種句子，試問錄取委員會(huì)的教授什么感覺？所以在英語文書寫作過程中，應(yīng)該以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，配合適當(dāng)?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)雜句，簡(jiǎn)單句通?？梢约有└綄俪煞郑绶衷~短語，介詞短語，副詞短語，不定式動(dòng)詞短語。長(zhǎng)短句交叉。長(zhǎng)句和短句是就句子的字?jǐn)?shù)多少，長(zhǎng)短而言的。長(zhǎng)句和短句各有其優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。長(zhǎng)句因?yàn)槭褂玫亩ㄕZ，狀語較多，限制了概念的外延，增大了概念的內(nèi)涵，所以比較精確，嚴(yán)密，但使用起來不夠活潑簡(jiǎn)便。短句，由于字?jǐn)?shù)少，直截了當(dāng)，一般比較簡(jiǎn)潔，明快，有力，但不利于表達(dá)復(fù)雜的語義內(nèi)容。在具體語言活動(dòng)中，最好長(zhǎng)短句交替使用。這既體現(xiàn)了節(jié)奏上的要求，也是意義上的需要。

　　隨便舉個(gè)例子好了：Statement of PurposeLiving in a modern city where lights glow long after the sun sets， it’s difficult to imagine places where electricity is unreliable or sporadic. Yet the major energy crises experienced by India， South Africa and California in recent decades represent a global problem that I’m eager to find solutions to.During college， I’ve had three-year multidisciplinary research experience and participated in three energy-related projects， each of which leveraged different disciplinary approaches. These experiences have brought clarity to my immediate goal: to become an engineer in the advanced power energy industry and boost energy ficiency for both producers and consumers…

　　可見，句式不同，表達(dá)效果也就不同。只有句式多樣化，文章才會(huì)生動(dòng)有趣，充滿活力。恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂媚承┓椒ɑ蚴侄斡兄趯?shí)際表達(dá)形式的多樣多，增強(qiáng)表達(dá)效果。在文書寫作過程中應(yīng)該巧妙運(yùn)用各種句型，讓文書更出彩，表達(dá)更流暢，向offer邁向一大步！