4月GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng)：健身器材提高健康水平.

　　4月5日GMAT換庫后，小編為大家收集整理4月份的GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng)，這篇是關(guān)于健身器材提高健康水平的文章，分享給大家，希望對大家有所幫助，僅供參考。

　　【原始】

　　作文是有一本里面包含一個(gè)bodybuilder&aposs exercise machines的文章的雜志賣的很好，幾乎經(jīng)常售罄，所以一個(gè)小鎮(zhèn)認(rèn)為應(yīng)該多引進(jìn)這些健身器材從而help to maximize the fitness levels of town&aposs residents。 作文很好寫，大家自由發(fā)揮。

　　【原題】AA61. 考古11月JJ32

　　The following appeared in the letters-to-the-editor section of a local newspaper:

　　“Muscle Monthly, a fitness magazine that regularly features pictures of bodybuilders using state-of-the-art exercise machines, frequently sells out, according to the owner of Skyview Newsstand. To help maximize fitness levels in our town’s residents, we should, therore, equip our new community fitness center with such machines.”

　　Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.

　　一份叫Muscle Monthly的健康雜志規(guī)律性地刊登使用最好的訓(xùn)練器械的健美運(yùn)動(dòng)員的照片。據(jù)skyview報(bào)攤的攤主說它經(jīng)常賣完。為了提高我鎮(zhèn)居民的健康水平，我們應(yīng)該給我們的新健身中心裝備這樣的器械。

　　【參考思路】

　　1.Causal relationship有他因：

　　1作者將健身視為fitness的唯一途徑，但其實(shí)jogging、swimming等都可以強(qiáng)身健體，還可以控制飲食(have a balanced diet)。

　　2雜志賣得好得原因不一定是因?yàn)榭沁@個(gè)機(jī)器，很可能是價(jià)錢便宜，或其他的內(nèi)容吸引讀者。

　　2、False analogy:

　　該機(jī)器使用于健美運(yùn)動(dòng)員，但不一定適用于普通居民。

　　3、Gratuitous assumption:

　　那些人很可能并不真正用這些機(jī)器，而只是擺出造型。

　　4、Doubtful survey:

　　這個(gè)雜志賣的好這個(gè)消息來自the owner of Skyview Newsstand. 這是什么角色，是機(jī)器提供商?還是主流媒體?所以，存在著信息來源不是很清晰。

　　【參考范文】

　　In this argument the author concludes that the new community fitness center should be equipped with the state-of-the-art exercise machines featured in Muscle Monthly magazine. In support of this recommendation two reasons are offered: (1) Muscle Monthly contains pictures of bodybuilders using such machines, and (2) Muscle Monthly is a popular magazine, as evidenced by the fact that it frequently sells out at the local newsstand. This argument is questionable on two counts.

　　First, a major implication of the argument is that the bodybuilders pictured using the machines in Muscle Monthly magazine reached their state of fitness as a result of using these machines. The only evidence offered to support this contention, however, is the pictures in the magazine. It is possible that the bodybuilders pictured use different equipment for their workouts and are merely posing with the machines for advertising purposes.

　　Second, the author assumes that machines that are suitable for bodybuilding will also be suitable to help maximize the fitness levels of the town’s residents. This assumption is highly questionable. Machines designed to increase muscle development are significantly different from those designed to increase cardiovascular fitness. Consequently, it is unlikely that the machines pictured in the magazine will be of much use to help maximize the fitness levels of the town’s residents.

　　In conclusion, this argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the author would have to show that the bodybuilders pictured using the exercise machines actually used the machines to reach their level of muscle development. Additionally, the author would have to show that the machines were suitable for increasing the fitness levels of the persons using them.

　　以上就是關(guān)于健身器材提高健康水平的GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng)的全部內(nèi)容，考生朋友可以有選擇的看看，最后需要提醒各位的是，機(jī)經(jīng)雖然會(huì)對我們解題有所幫助，但是在考場中即使題目很像也要避免秒選，最后祝大家都能考出好成績。