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【原題】AA61. 考古11月JJ32
The following appeared in the letters-to-the-editor section of a local newspaper:
“Muscle Monthly, a fitness magazine that regularly features pictures of bodybuilders using state-of-the-art exercise machines, frequently sells out, according to the owner of Skyview Newsstand. To help maximize fitness levels in our town’s residents, we should, therore, equip our new community fitness center with such machines.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.
一份叫Muscle Monthly的健康雜志規(guī)律性地刊登使用最好的訓練器械的健美運動員的照片。據(jù)skyview報攤的攤主說它經常賣完。為了提高我鎮(zhèn)居民的健康水平,我們應該給我們的新健身中心裝備這樣的器械。
【參考思路】
False causal relationship:
① 作者將健身視為fitness的唯一途徑,但其實jogging、swimming等都可以強身健體,還可以控制飲食(have a balanced diet)。
?、?雜志賣得好得原因不一定是因為刊登這個機器,很可能是價錢便宜,或其他的內容吸引讀者。
False analogy:
該機器使用于健美運動員,但不一定適用于普通居民。
Gratuitous assumption:
那些人很可能并不真正用這些機器,而只是擺出造型。
Vested interest:
這個雜志賣的好這個消息來自the owner of Skyview Newsstand. 這是什么角色,是機器提供商?還是主流媒體?所以,存在著信息來源不是很清晰。
【參考范文】
In this argument the author concludes that the new community fitness center should be equipped with the state-of-the-art exercise machines featured in Muscle Monthly magazine. In support of this recommendation two reasons are offered: (1) Muscle Monthly contains pictures of bodybuilders using such machines, and (2) Muscle Monthly is a popular magazine, as evidenced by the fact that it frequently sells out at the local newsstand. This argument is questionable on two counts.
First, a major implication of the argument is that the bodybuilders pictured using the machines in Muscle Monthly magazine reached their state of fitness as a result of using these machines. The only evidence offered to support this contention, however, is the pictures in the magazine. It is possible that the bodybuilders pictured use different equipment for their workouts and are merely posing with the machines for advertising purposes.
Second, the author assumes that machines that are suitable for bodybuilding will also be suitable to help maximize the fitness levels of the town’s residents. This assumption is highly questionable. Machines designed to increase muscle development are significantly different from those designed to increase cardiovascular fitness. Consequently, it is unlikely that the machines pictured in the magazine will be of much use to help maximize the fitness levels of the town’s residents.
In conclusion, this argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the author would have to show that the bodybuilders pictured using the exercise machines actually used the machines to reach their level of muscle development. Additionally, the author would have to show that the machines were suitable for increasing the fitness levels of the persons using them.
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